Date: 2009-07-12 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fictionalaspect.livejournal.com
I really liked this - despite the conflict within the story itself, everything flowed really nicely from scene to scene. I also loved all the stops and starts, the kind of negotiations that come along with Jon's job and lifestyle. Lovely job!
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