Chapter One of Untitled Wishverse Epic

Please Read. I worked hard on this...And I am still a little iffy...Otherwise I wouldn't post it until I was done. Leave a comment. Lemme know what you think. I'm friends locking so that no one else can see it yet, and it isn't being posted anywhere but here for the time being.

( Wishverse Fic. Chapter One. No couples yet, will be C/G. Not rated yet. )

I'll try to get Chapter 2 out tomorrow or Sunday.